Thursday, 23 March 2017

4CF Bridges by Jodie


Dear F.S Diary,
Last week in forest school we had to build bridges. We had to create mini bridges and large bridges. The mini bridges had to hold a toy dinosaur. The large bridge had to hold a teacher. Most of the bridges held the teachers some didn’t. There was also gardening we had to paint the borders.

By Jodie 4CF

5 comments:

  1. Year 5 at Rossmore School27 March 2017 at 14:49

    1. We really like your blog post because we thought it was extremely interesting.
    2. We 're quite concerned about the teachers stood on bridges that didn't make it. What happened to them?
    3. To make this even better, we think you could try to vary your sentence structure. Why not try to use different sentence openers? For example:

    First, we had to create mini bridges...

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    1. Thanks Year 5! What a constructive comment for us! I can confirm no teachers were harmed in the making of this lesson! :D We would love to comment on your blog, could be have the web address?

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  2. rachel 6na,matthew 4ec29 March 2017 at 15:45

    thank you for that comment that really made us improve with our wrighting skills

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  3. That's really cool! It's sounds really fun! I will totally try that! Kawaii~Neko

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  4. Thank you year5 that has helped me a lot with my handwriting and my literacy!!

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